Community Story Project
Draft 2 Peer Feedback
Each person will watch two videos and provide written feedback (see questions below for prompt). Write your feedback in the text editor of your choice, and then copy/paste into the appropriate Bridges Forum Topic (click the "Forum" option in Bridges). You will have 30 minutes for each review.
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Peer Feedback Prompt (aim for a healthy paragraph or two in response to each of the following questions.
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How do you understand the point of view and dramatic question in this piece? What is the community partner’s purpose in sharing his/her story? What does she or he most want viewers to understand/take away from the story?
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How effective is the narrative arc of this story? Consider the introduction and conclusion—how well does the story cohere across the video?
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How do you respond to the pacing of this video? Does the pacing allow you to follow the story? Does it allow you to pause and reflect, to breathe? Are there places where the pacing is too fast or too slow or too monotone?
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What revision recommendations do you have for the group? Be concrete, be specific, and address both global and local concerns.
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Video Assignments
2:00-3:20
Clement Shabani (posted on Matt's, Melanie's, and Meghan's websites): Gary, Chris, Derek, Savanaugh, Carli, Johanna
Bernard Georges (posted on Cara's, Nick's, and Amie's websites): Gary, Matt, Meghan, Madison, Melanie
Carolina Correa (posted on Gary's, Johanna's, and Jamie's websites): Will, Chris, Nick, Madison, Paul
Elizabeth Parson (posted on Paul's and Jennifer's websites): Will, Cara, Amie, Jamie, Nikki
Esther Juty (posted on Savanaugh's and Will's websites): Ofelia, Cara, Amie, Jamie, Paul, Nikki
Mary Brown (posted on Nikki's, Chris', and Ofelia's websites): Matt, Derek, Meghan, Carli, Jennifer, Johanna
Vanessa Malika Biniungo (posted on Madison's, Carli's, and Derek's websites): Ofelia, Nick, Savanaugh, Melanie, Jennifer
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3:30-4:50
Victor Morente (posted on Shami's and Emmett's websites): Dani, Kerry, Mariana, Paige, Megan, Julia
Chanda Womack (posted on Jasmine's, Paige's, and Leah's websites): Dani, Emmett, Mariana, Rebekah, Megan, Anthony
Chanravy Proeung (posted on Anthony's, Sam's and Rebekah's websites): Shami, Kerry, Jasmine, Julia, Kathryn
Cecelia Nelson (posted on Mariana's, Julia's and Kathryn's websites): Shami, Sam, Jasmine, Rebekah, Leah
Sania Dade & Sarah Roberts (Posted on Kerry's, Dani's, and Megan's websites): Sam, Emmett, Paige, Leah, Kathryn, Anthony