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Community Story Project

Draft 2 Peer Feedback

Each person will watch two videos and provide written feedback (see questions below for prompt). Write your feedback in the text editor of your choice, and then copy/paste into the appropriate Bridges Forum Topic (click the "Forum" option in Bridges). You will have 30 minutes for each review.

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Peer Feedback Prompt (aim for a healthy paragraph or two in response to each of the following questions.

  1. How do you understand the point of view and dramatic question in this piece? What is the community partner’s purpose in sharing his/her story? What does she or he most want viewers to understand/take away from the story?

  2. How effective is the narrative arc of this story? Consider the introduction and conclusion—how well does the story cohere across the video?

  3. How do you respond to the pacing of this video? Does the pacing allow you to follow the story? Does it allow you to pause and reflect, to breathe? Are there places where the pacing is too fast or too slow or too monotone?

  4. What revision recommendations do you have for the group? Be concrete, be specific, and address both global and local concerns.

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Video Assignments

2:00-3:20

Clement Shabani (posted on Matt's, Melanie's, and Meghan's websites): Gary, Chris, Derek, Savanaugh, Carli, Johanna

Bernard Georges (posted on Cara's, Nick's, and Amie's websites): Gary, Matt, Meghan, Madison, Melanie

Carolina Correa (posted on Gary's, Johanna's, and Jamie's websites): Will, Chris, Nick, Madison, Paul

Elizabeth Parson (posted on Paul's and Jennifer's websites): Will, Cara, Amie, Jamie, Nikki

Esther Juty (posted on Savanaugh's and Will's websites): Ofelia, Cara, Amie, Jamie, Paul, Nikki

Mary Brown (posted on Nikki's, Chris', and Ofelia's websites): Matt, Derek, Meghan, Carli, Jennifer, Johanna

Vanessa Malika Biniungo (posted on Madison's, Carli's, and Derek's websites): Ofelia, Nick, Savanaugh, Melanie, Jennifer

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3:30-4:50

Victor Morente (posted on Shami's and Emmett's websites): Dani, Kerry, Mariana, Paige, Megan, Julia

Chanda Womack (posted on Jasmine's, Paige's, and Leah's websites): Dani, Emmett, Mariana, Rebekah, Megan, Anthony

Chanravy Proeung (posted on Anthony's, Sam's and Rebekah's websites): Shami, Kerry, Jasmine, Julia, Kathryn

Cecelia Nelson (posted on Mariana's, Julia's and Kathryn's websites): Shami, Sam, Jasmine, Rebekah, Leah

Sania Dade & Sarah Roberts (Posted on Kerry's, Dani's, and Megan's websites): Sam, Emmett, Paige, Leah, Kathryn, Anthony

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